JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Long Walk Home]

It's very ambient

It's almost perfect for a scene of love, or perhaps even a moment of fear.

It seems to move the sense of peace.

The wolves sounds in the background don't seem to relate to anything in particular, but it does add a nice touch.

[Introduction (Unfinished)]

very ambient...

Kinda like Coldplay in a sense.

You kinda lost it at around 20 seconds.

But it gets productively better as it plays.

It could afford to be a little in sync,

But suddenly it speeds up around 55 seconds and then slows down.

Keep good tempo...but that's simply with practice

Keep at it! You're only getting better even when it doesn't seem like it.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks for another very helpful review! again, this is unfinished. it will get better when it's finished.

[TSH - Stay Home]

Not bad! allow me to be the first reviewer.

What needs work on...

Your voice is ALMOST THERE...but

Your voice overpowers the musical instruments. The Bass seems like it needs to be the strongest instrument...it's soft beats will add a nice touch to the music.

The guitar's plucking is a little off..ex. around 1:20 minutes

It starts off a little weak at first....but after about a minute you start getting into the flow of it.

That guitar thing after 2:00 and again after 2:33 minutes needs some work...doesn't really accompany with the rest of the song....sort of.... distracting

What is good....

The lyrics

The soft beginning and ending.

I can almost envision a music video.

-JBK

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

hey, thanks!

again, our band will try to work on the bass and plucking, and if it's still on our mixer, we'll remaster the vocals.

[TSH - Austin (She Says)]

Really Good

Your really in tune with each other.

Your voice is also in good tone.

But just before 57 seconds it sounds a little bit complicated. And that note you held wasn't quite steady.

Obviously you could still make improvements on this...but it does sound good.

However, sounding good and keeping good smoothness is another situation.

Some of the instruments I feel like they don't belong, but it can work if you know how long and when during the song you can play them.

Around 3:00 minutes it sounds wierd

again around 3:27...it jumbles...like you messed up the rhythm.

3:50 guitar solo should be longer

Overall Very satisfied with the song.

Be sure to include the lyrics, I'm sure people will want to know what your sing about.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks again for another detailed review and your critisism!

actually, the reason the drums got messed up is because antoine, our drummer, dropped a drumstick around 3:20 when he was laying down his drum tracks, so i had to run over there and give it to him. i was the one monitoring the drum tracks at that point, so i had to leave my spot and rush over there, which is something i will hardly do because i have to make sure the tracks don't overdo their peak point. (mixer term XP)

thanks again!

[To the End of The World]

Be sure to play this Gig on the day of Ragnarock

It has that Viking HEavy Metal feel.

Perfect for when Ragnarock arrives! ^^

cazok responds:

I have an agreement with Odin...
Thanks for your review!

[Castle Crashers The Crusade]

Is it in the game by chance?

I would make good music for a chase scene.

Then again...it sounds something I would hear in a Megaman X series game.

DarKsidE555 responds:

Nope, guess this had no chance at all. I mean it's their game after all and they decide what is cool and what not.

Hehe...well...yeah...what can I say. Mega Man is my obsession...kind of. ;D

Anyways, thanks for listening!

[Sunny day!]

This would make a good flash

It's very pleasant...calm...yet also becomes quite catchy in rhythm.

[Crawling 2.1 - Mjattie]

Find myself floating in space....

it sure is peaceful...watching galaxies float by...

That's what this music reminds me of.

[»§« Coming Home]

Wow....

this is album quality music.

You should make a music video for this!

Like she's singing in the snow or something...and wolves are gazing with hungry eyes....and the wolves turn into the musicians.

MaestroRage responds:

Heehee, thank you! That really means a lot to me!
That is some interesting imagery... =3 Kind of twisted... I like it! Anyway, thank you very much for your kind words, and thanks for listening!
With love,
LadyArsenic <3

[==(Carousel)==]

I listen to your music often

I have no story for this one...other than all I can see in my mind is a bunch of colors stringing together with the tune of the music...

It's dark...and all I can see are small and dimly lit colors being scattered with each beat in the music.

Lot's of purple, blues, yellows, and greens.

Buoy responds:

Late respond and nothing to add.

How low can I possibly go?

O Sea, inspire me!!!!! >:(