Recent Movie Reviews

Ed, Edd n Eddy in 2017 Ed, Edd n Eddy in 2017

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is exactly what would happen if there was an Ed Edd n Eddy reboot.

A continuation is what we need.

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Dreading Water Dreading Water

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Pitch this to Nick Jr or PBS or Disney Jr.

"Shantae" Fan Animation "Shantae" Fan Animation

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is what the animated cut-scenes in the game would've been like.

Great Job.

Proof an animated series would also work too.

Perhaps the animation team from Wakfu should hire you.

booksuny responds:

HAHA Thank you.
My job is scenario writer, animation is my hobby.

Recent Game Reviews

Strip Poker Night at the Inventory Strip Poker Night at the Inventory

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Im actually amazed you have unique dialogue for each of the characters.

Imagine what this would be like with voice acting.

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Punch The Trump Punch The Trump

Rated 5 / 5 stars


Now make one with Kim Davis and Martin Shkreli.

Pokkaloh 0.8.3 Pokkaloh 0.8.3

Rated 5 / 5 stars

You know, I actually really like this ^_^

Sure one-shot adult games are fine, but an open world RPG Harvest Moon style game is pleasant, relaxing, and motivational for players. And titillating for the adult players who enjoy a little porn.

There's something charming about collecting materials, building better things, and working the land.
That's what makes the Harvest Moon series addictive.

Perhaps you can work this off as an "Adult Harvest Moon style simulator". Basically just borrow all concepts from Harvest Moon and Rune Factory but add the adult dating simulation to it.

Where your objective is to build the island from the ground up, befriend the new tenants, and tame the wilderness with intricate machinery *(water filters, irrigations, and such).

Dramatic moments can occur with the coming of typhoons that could potentially ruin crops and destroy homes, motivating the player to rebuild and build relationships with certain NPCs.

Put an emphasis on gameplay towards community, helpfulness, and kindness. Perhaps a story about not wanting to sell out to big-time corporations who want to take over the island, and perhaps eventually set yourself off as your own country, making yourself King and the tenants your consorts. Or not, perhaps you only want one wife and just be friends with the others. And you can even make a female version with an island of hot guys! Or maybe if there will be guys on the island as well, you can help them by being match maker for partners they like, just like Harvest Moon.

And this could be a very popular Steam Game next to HuniePop levels of popularity!

I can imagine the Let's Plays now. LOL

Because unlike most Hentai JRPG's, this game could hold objective and creativity towards HOW you build your island, where you place buildings, and how you dig irrigations for crops, etc. The more you level up your trading, the more you can buy custom costumes for your island tenants.

So much you can do with this game.

I wish you luck.

But if you want my opinion on how to improve, shoot me a PM.

But in the meantime, I'll be happy to review each new version you put on Newgrounds.

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pokkaloh responds:

Sure there is plenty that can be added to the game but what you're describing is something that a big game studio can make. I'm just a solo developer commissioning artist.
BTW, they will be possibility to play a female and some inhabitants will be male ;)

Recent Audio Reviews

Les Mis the Confrontation Les Mis the Confrontation

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I would love to see you in a live play performance one day. You are a great 'thespian'.

Endless Forms Endless Forms

Rated 5 / 5 stars have NO idea how much I need this song right now.

Buoy responds:

Well at least now you have it! :D

Waltz of the Forest Waltz of the Forest

Rated 4 / 5 stars


It seems out of context.

Unlike your Banjo-Kazooie song....It fits!
It seems appropriate as a tribute.

The tune fits "towards" Banjo-Kazooie.
You use an actual banjo for the Banjo-Kazooie song.

I can't associate Mario RPG with a techno rap.
Nor in the flash...with that deep 'anime serious-ness-drama'.
I remember the game being a very fun, light-hearted, yet challenging game.

Especially in this vocal style and musical tone.
You put allot of hard work into it. But I just don't enjoy it as much.

"Duane & Brando" uses actual game music from the game and distorts it just to a small degree. They rap to it.

"Brentalfloss" does basically the same as what your doing.
But in my opinion, does it to a better degree.

But both artists stay towards the game's original 'tone' in terms of what the game was about, it's mood, it's sound...etc.

I'm not sure how best to explain it, cause I don't know how to explain myself properly.

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Recent Art Reviews

Nightmare Cops Nightmare Cops

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Is that Brody from Yo Mama?

Can't wait for the final game to finish.

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Change Change

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Draw him eating chocolate cake with missiles for candles.

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Say My Name! Say My Name!

Rated 5 / 5 stars