JakBaronKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TFOS #1: Practice]

Hm.....seems incomplete

You overwhelm the flash with huge scenery and small *almost microscopic" flash characters with the tinest font I've ever had to read on a flash movie.

I'm sure you a beginner...If so you can bone up your skills in the Flash Tuturial Section of Newgrounds. Some made by Tom Fulp himself.

You really left me at a cliff hanger. It kinda reminds me of SMBZ. by Alvin Earthworm or at least it seemed to be going in that direction.

I'm sure you've got story tallent, but what good is that if you can't express it with your full potential.

Don't worry, be patient, you can take all the time you need before sending your next flash.

If your not being hired to do flash...I would suggest taking as much time as you need to make whatever you do satifictory to yourself.

Remember...no one should offend you, even if they purposelyt try to....take any sort of advice and criticism in stride towards self-improvement.

Good luck!

[Christian Quotes]

It was thought provoking...but.....

Please don't take offense to my review. I express this opinion about your flash as freely as you express yours.

Though your viewpoints against why you do not like Christianity is your "right" and "should be respected". The Flash was thought provoking....but possibly in a bad way.

I do not feel however that "Mud-Slinging" against the relgion does not make yourself look good on your part. If that was indeed your intentions.

Quoting these quotes from "other" Christians publicly can leave a ill-view against Christian religion. And people who take offense will look ill towards you as a person.

These individuals who quote about Christianity and their viewpoints in this flash-the quotes in truth-"do not express the viewpoints of the Christian Community as a "whole."

Also it is not clear if you posted their quotes with their "permission." You might want to read up on D-6's.

Note-the rest is my own opinion. Please give me mutual respect.

Not all Christians can agree with eachother, and neither should us non-chrsitians' opinions affect eachother. We are all "individuals" and to each our own opinion. Even Christians are free to read and speak how the Bible should be intrepreted. Their opinions are not Fact, nor should be engraved in stone.

Not only that...I feel that the way you compiled this flash is for other people to see "how christianity is-" though these quotes. These Quotes...as I repeate...do not express the Christian Religion...Community...or the Bible...as a whole.

These quotes are merly the opinions of other invididuals who's opinions are to be respected mutually. As hopefull they will respect other's opinions.

Mutual Respect is the most important element I am trying to express in this flash.

But I feel that your actually trying to express a "hateful" response or a "negative" response to the viewer who watch this flash and may in term...turn their "negativity" to the Christian Religion.

People say things that don't really agree with others...but I feel this is slandering and demeaning towards the Christian Religion.

[SporkHazard Studios: Lol]

This definately belongs in the Anime Section.

I was at first thinking it was a wierd flash. But it got better around the end. HAHAHA her face looked so wierd! LAZER! HAHAHA and the dancing people at hte end credits is well done. Your friends must be so happy! Bouncy Boobs are funny! Heehee.

Take no offense from that last comment. I'm just really gitty. That flash has that sort of effect on me.

Make the anime portion equal to the badly drawn portion. Like interchange it so people know whats going on.

Good luck on your future flashes!

SporkHazard responds:

I'm glad you like it.
It seems everyone is getting a bit confused about the transition from the 'stick-figure' part to the 'anime' scene. o.o;
I'm sure we'll get better at this in the future. ^^ (ItemHazard)

[Behind The Sache]

If there was a Hitler Series, it should be there.

This story and Idea is totally origional...He should get all angry and raise his voice and stuff. Hitler is a College Heart Break Loser? :D-hahahaha. That was so funny! And at the end a man peed on him. Killer!

"You should get motivated! This is good stuff!"

8 being it's not complete.

-Good Job though

[Metal Gear Shroom]

HAHAHA

With some more footage this will make Portal of the Week. Can you really do that in Metal Gear Snake Eater? Eat some bad mushrooms?

You must add more footage and make this hilarious!

Good Job

[Saw 2 in flash]

Great Fan Halloween Flash

Your voice acting is not so good though, but your animation is B+.

Don't take offense, It's honestly not as good as others but your on the right track. It was scary and makes me want to watch Saw on Halloween again. That movie is the Crunk fo=Shizle. But your on the right track.

It is sometimes necessary to hire voice actors for your flashes, voices can be submitted as MP3 through email and others may have professional recording devices.

For example...Johnny Utah, uses a Navy seals head set and voice piece to record his Tankmen series.

Good Job Flash over all...you will definately pass judgement.

[Awesome Video Games Ep14]

At First I though...WTF....but then...wow! that's

AWESOME!

With some editing, this could be a new show on G4 ria. channel 437 digital cabel. The only network dedicated to videogame reviews and TV shows.

That was awsome, your acting was totally origional...ROB wow! I never had to grow up with ROB. I started my first game with the Super Nintendo. You guys are really hard core gammers!

LOL I love this Flash! It belongs to Newgrounds!

FarFromSubtle responds:

Thanks dude! NewGrounds is full of INTENSE dudes and dudettes!

[Stick WAR Trailer]

Can't Wait till it's a game!

It kinda reminds me of the "Castle" Series only with a midevil theme. Can't wait to play as a Spartan Stick figure. What if there was a game based on 300 using stick figures? That would rock !

[Funny Cartoon #2]

This seems a bit incomplete.

You have a good concept. Maybe Luigi will go on an acid trip. Other than that, your animation was not bad for sprite animation. But it needs to be a bit more complete, it sort of just left sort of hanging. But its still good though. I did laugh a bit...just not to a satifactary level.

[Go, Go, Parody Rangers! 3]

YES!!!! THE LONG AWAITED CONCLUSION!

I would check Newgrounds every week just for this sequal. I am dissapointed that you want to end the series. It's just a masterpiece of comic writing. You should go professional and make comedy scripts for Hollywood.