JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[==(The First Flight)==]

I imagine...

a girl with snow white hair and a white dress...riding a huge white flat crystal in the shape of an square emerald. Playing the flute to the rising sun. A boy down below wearing green, plays the piano in the woods. Soon they meet and their music brings peace to a storm.

[LoZ-Rutela's Final Goodbye]

If you made this...

then you should play for the Sydney Orchestra.

Setu-Firestorm responds:

Yes, I did make this, and if it were up to me, I'd compose for the Sydney Orchestra.

It's a shame I can't. =(

Anyway, thanks for the review.

[][ Welcome to Rainbow ][]

Very Techno

Good but reaptative as you say. Can easily be fixd with some thought. It reminds me of European Techno raves. Good Job.

mybrobilo responds:

thanks for the review. ill try to fix if i have time. we'll see................

[Knuck If U Buck(remade)]

Not bad Dog...but....

...consider how your trying to make fast sounds with slow sounds. Especially at the beginning. It has to be more consistent. And I can't wait till you add rap I cant wait to hear some great sounds.

Fast sounds must be balanced with the slow sounds. Your sounds are way too fast around the beginning.

[==(Troposphere Remix)==]

Imagine an Indian Warrior on top of his boat.

This is a powerful indian warrior playing his flute, calling the winter breeze to come to the forest. He is the bringer of winter.

[==(Mirrorbell)==]

Can you imagine falling down a cavern of crystals.

Each one glowing a different color according to the music. I keep on falling towards a bright light at the end of the abyss.

[Black Mamba [DA]]

Alright

But your buildup is too soft. the Main beat of the background shouldn't dominate the build up. Otherwise it just sounds the same though out the songs. It did get better afterwards but consider what I said for the beginning part.

[~Burden~]

Very Sad indeed!

You must have had some troubleing times. I hope life smiles uppon you soon.

[~Goodbye~]

Kinda goes everywhere but...

but I can tell this music came from the heart. You may not be a natural born musician, but your tallents can only be exceeded by the strength and love of your heart.

Cosmos8942 responds:

Heh...good intuition.

Of course your comment "You may not be a natural born musician" hits me kinda hard...cause uh...its the truth >.>. Piano is the only thing I can just sit down and play...and perhaps I could go back sometime in the future and redo this one.

Thanks though ^^,
-AJ-