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Very strange...does sound like a swamp...

the clicking sounds are like bugs in the air clicking their mouths and pincers. The sky is a hazy mix of orange and pink. The swamp is dirty and brown, but beautiful blue flowers bloom from the lilly pads. Inside each lilly pad is a tiny fairy girl...playing the drums. I continue to ride the raft constantly amazed by all I see...the boa consttrictors with emerald skin and diamond eyes...the dragon flys of gold and silver...and the seperation of clean water and dirty water at the cross road.

Reminds me of that Panda Flash

the ones with the lolipops and they end up dying from choking. It's cute in a sort of disturbed way. No offense on your part it's just this song reminds me of that flash.
What with the title and all.

I imagine...

a girl with snow white hair and a white dress...riding a huge white flat crystal in the shape of an square emerald. Playing the flute to the rising sun. A boy down below wearing green, plays the piano in the woods. Soon they meet and their music brings peace to a storm.

If you made this...

then you should play for the Sydney Orchestra.

Setu-Firestorm responds:

Yes, I did make this, and if it were up to me, I'd compose for the Sydney Orchestra.

It's a shame I can't. =(

Anyway, thanks for the review.

Very Techno

Good but reaptative as you say. Can easily be fixd with some thought. It reminds me of European Techno raves. Good Job.

mybrobilo responds:

thanks for the review. ill try to fix if i have time. we'll see................

Not bad Dog...but....

...consider how your trying to make fast sounds with slow sounds. Especially at the beginning. It has to be more consistent. And I can't wait till you add rap I cant wait to hear some great sounds.

Fast sounds must be balanced with the slow sounds. Your sounds are way too fast around the beginning.

Imagine an Indian Warrior on top of his boat.

This is a powerful indian warrior playing his flute, calling the winter breeze to come to the forest. He is the bringer of winter.

Can you imagine falling down a cavern of crystals.

Each one glowing a different color according to the music. I keep on falling towards a bright light at the end of the abyss.

Alright

But your buildup is too soft. the Main beat of the background shouldn't dominate the build up. Otherwise it just sounds the same though out the songs. It did get better afterwards but consider what I said for the beginning part.

"The best way to change the world is to first change yourself."

Age 37, Male

Inside my own mind.......

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