JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dj Ses - I'm RMP (Produced By BeatBreaker187)]

Wow...I never heard Rap soooo TOUGH

This song makes me not wanna mess with ya.

definitely should be part of your album.

Who knows...maybe I'll see you on MTV.

Keep up the good work!

[TSH - Odd Man Out]

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Thumbs up Dude!

That was like 90% perfect!

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks :D

[==(Repairing a Broken Sky]

You ota have someone do a flash based on the music

I can totally picture the events of the sky breaking with the beats of the bass...and maybe robots are reparing it like it was glass.

[TSH - Elias]

almost perfect

I'm sure you can find the fix ups on your own...

Mainly the drums with it's lower beat (2x fast beat on the feet is too much, should have a moderate tempo to match with the rest of the song.)

It gets a little bit too fast around 2 minutes...

Very few mistakes...some fix up is all you need.

It's intro is very good...and
It ends very nicely.

I'm pretty darn sure you'll make it as a real band one day. Just keep at it!

Every song you submit has fewer and fewer mistakes...it just proves you've got what it takes!

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thank you so much! i hope to improve and make stuff even better than this song, even if it takes a little time. again, thanks! :D

[==(Distant Oceans)==]

Ever Played ECO

It's a videogame where you play as a dolphin....

I used to imagine being a dolphin....exploring the ocean depths and seeing an alien world...

Like potrayed in the videogames....it would be filled with unique creatures....

Crystal Jellyfish

Jade Sharks

HumpBack Whales decorated with Diamond Covered Barnacles.

Then I would swim from the bottom and dart fast towards the surface....breaking the water and flying high into space...

I would soar for about a minute or two...then come soaring back down....

[TSH - Where You Are]

Gettin' Better (Thumbs up)

Good intro...nice an slow acoustics...even motion...the flute in the background is a nice touch...

But around 30 seconds the guitar kinda get's sloppy.

But it gets better after that.

Your voice is definitely ALLOT better!

But "DO YOU KNOW (drop down fast sound....) HOW I GO!! IT was just a BAD DREAM..." (Needs more even flow) "WHEN YOU FALL ASLEEP!

Basically you need to have good flow. Like a water flow.

Powerful lyrics! Love it!

fix that high stuck sound around 3:18...

Remember...you can fix your pieces...and you don't always have to submit if your not sure if it's perfect...unless you just want to know how well or what could be improved.

My advice...once you have enough songs for an album...FIX them....listen to them again and again and again! And fix where you think it could use some changin.

All your songs have such original and great lyrics.

If you ever go pro...Don't let the fame get the best of you...focus on spreading a good message through your music...give considerable amounts of money to charity (secretly) and watch out who you date.

Remember...IF I may preach here...

You will not be entrusted with the Blessings of Heaven unless you can prove you can be responsible with your blessings here on Earth.

Do not let the riches of the world corrupt you...do not let your talents make you arrogant. You do music for the glory of all that is good...how you express yourself in your heart...and how you can make people understand feelings.

I know you will be great envoys of music. You might inspire...make someone change a lifestyle....help people understand.

You do it all for the sake of love of music.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thank you so much!

since this will be on the album, we could probably take this and put it back into the studio and re-record some of the guitar parts, stuff like that.

again, thanks!

[Rose At Nightfall]

This reminds me allot of Kingdom Hearts 2

I suppose this is good for those action packed scenes that often involve a big chase or speeding up.

It sounds perfect except I feel that the repetition of the same sound right after 29 seconds is a bit much...it should go directly to the next set of sounds and just flow with it.

NemesisTheory responds:

Yup, that would probably fit too!

And yes, it probably could've used some more variation but I felt there was enough of that, although I do agree with that the trumpets gave off that repetivity-feeling because it soared above the rest of the stuff every few seconds. Won't happen again without a reason. :p

I'm glad you liked it, I agree with your critique and will definitely handle that stuff in the future! :)

Thank you for the review!

[Pokemon Sinnoh Pokerap (FULL)]

Wow...this deserves a higher score than it is now.

It must have taken a LONG LONG time to figure out how to create a rhyming symphony of Pokemon names. That Poke-rap was somewhat considered a fiasco when the series first started out (some parents accusing it of being subliminal messaging) but I felt it had a bit of a rhyming effect...and it's even avaliable on I-Tunes download (i think it's still downloadable).

But point being said...it must have taken a long time....only thing I felt it lacked was a chorus.

Like how they say...."With over 150 different kinds of Pok-E-Mon! etc"

But making the names rap is the real challange.

Perhaps is you give the idea to Nintendo...they will make a full length one for American Television. But then again...it might be better as simple fan work, yours to claim and yours alone that is.

Good Job!

sonicmega responds:

Subliminal messaging?! My god, I didn't know they went that far in accusing it. That is just ridiculous.

Yeah, I agree, a chorus probably would have helped this submission a lot, but being it too late now I hope you'll accept what's here now.

I actually did send the Mp3 to Nintendo Power's offices (at the request of my friends), but have received no response yet. That's fine, however, since I didn't expect anything to happen anyway.

Lastly, the major reason why this song has the score it does now is a combination of people downvoting it because it involves Pokemon and those downvoting it simply because it got a higher place than a song they feel "deserved it more". Not necessarily fair, but hey, this is Newgrounds, closest thing to real life there is. Best deal with it.

Anyway, thanks for the lengthy review, and for your vote! :D

[==(Ice Desert called Eart]

It looks like you beat me to the image for this...

I read your comments...it potrays exactly what the music feels like.

I love all your songs ^^

[Long Walk Home]

It's very ambient

It's almost perfect for a scene of love, or perhaps even a moment of fear.

It seems to move the sense of peace.

The wolves sounds in the background don't seem to relate to anything in particular, but it does add a nice touch.