Really Good
Your really in tune with each other.
Your voice is also in good tone.
But just before 57 seconds it sounds a little bit complicated. And that note you held wasn't quite steady.
Obviously you could still make improvements on this...but it does sound good.
However, sounding good and keeping good smoothness is another situation.
Some of the instruments I feel like they don't belong, but it can work if you know how long and when during the song you can play them.
Around 3:00 minutes it sounds wierd
again around 3:27...it jumbles...like you messed up the rhythm.
3:50 guitar solo should be longer
Overall Very satisfied with the song.
Be sure to include the lyrics, I'm sure people will want to know what your sing about.