very ambient...
Kinda like Coldplay in a sense.
You kinda lost it at around 20 seconds.
But it gets productively better as it plays.
It could afford to be a little in sync,
But suddenly it speeds up around 55 seconds and then slows down.
Keep good tempo...but that's simply with practice
Keep at it! You're only getting better even when it doesn't seem like it.
thanks for another very helpful review! again, this is unfinished. it will get better when it's finished.
Not bad! allow me to be the first reviewer.
What needs work on...
Your voice is ALMOST THERE...but
Your voice overpowers the musical instruments. The Bass seems like it needs to be the strongest instrument...it's soft beats will add a nice touch to the music.
The guitar's plucking is a little off..ex. around 1:20 minutes
It starts off a little weak at first....but after about a minute you start getting into the flow of it.
That guitar thing after 2:00 and again after 2:33 minutes needs some work...doesn't really accompany with the rest of the song....sort of.... distracting
What is good....
The lyrics
The soft beginning and ending.
I can almost envision a music video.
-JBK
hey, thanks!
again, our band will try to work on the bass and plucking, and if it's still on our mixer, we'll remaster the vocals.
Really Good
Your really in tune with each other.
Your voice is also in good tone.
But just before 57 seconds it sounds a little bit complicated. And that note you held wasn't quite steady.
Obviously you could still make improvements on this...but it does sound good.
However, sounding good and keeping good smoothness is another situation.
Some of the instruments I feel like they don't belong, but it can work if you know how long and when during the song you can play them.
Around 3:00 minutes it sounds wierd
again around 3:27...it jumbles...like you messed up the rhythm.
3:50 guitar solo should be longer
Overall Very satisfied with the song.
Be sure to include the lyrics, I'm sure people will want to know what your sing about.
thanks again for another detailed review and your critisism!
actually, the reason the drums got messed up is because antoine, our drummer, dropped a drumstick around 3:20 when he was laying down his drum tracks, so i had to run over there and give it to him. i was the one monitoring the drum tracks at that point, so i had to leave my spot and rush over there, which is something i will hardly do because i have to make sure the tracks don't overdo their peak point. (mixer term XP)
thanks again!
Be sure to play this Gig on the day of Ragnarock
It has that Viking HEavy Metal feel.
Perfect for when Ragnarock arrives! ^^
I have an agreement with Odin...
Thanks for your review!
Is it in the game by chance?
I would make good music for a chase scene.
Then again...it sounds something I would hear in a Megaman X series game.
Nope, guess this had no chance at all. I mean it's their game after all and they decide what is cool and what not.
Hehe...well...yeah...what can I say. Mega Man is my obsession...kind of. ;D
Anyways, thanks for listening!
This would make a good flash
It's very pleasant...calm...yet also becomes quite catchy in rhythm.
Find myself floating in space....
it sure is peaceful...watching galaxies float by...
That's what this music reminds me of.
Wow....
this is album quality music.
You should make a music video for this!
Like she's singing in the snow or something...and wolves are gazing with hungry eyes....and the wolves turn into the musicians.
Heehee, thank you! That really means a lot to me!
That is some interesting imagery... =3 Kind of twisted... I like it! Anyway, thank you very much for your kind words, and thanks for listening!
With love,
LadyArsenic <3
I dunno...
somehow mixing acoustics' with electric guitar at the beginning didn't sound right...but the rest of it was total killer Metal!
The beginning with the acoustic guitar is only minor...but it doesn't fit in in my opinion.
Its ok, everyone has their own tastes and opinions. Glad you liked it over all
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