It would be so sweet if you actually played guitar
Cause this sounds pretty darn good!
Heavy Metal and shit like that...this doesn't sound flawed at all in my opinion.
Give or take a tad repeative at times...
however there is a nice touch to adding a sense of calm around 3 minutes...
But what about singing?
Singing about Anguish...Pain...Suffering...Struggle ...Strength...SURVIVAL!
"I will survive this cold and aweful night! My repugnant soul cries to death! But My will shall get me though! I shall live! Or I shall die! It doesn't matter as long as I TRY!"
something like that?