I like the lyrics...it's just your singing >:(
Dude...you have the BEST lyrics...but please try to sing better.
This is GOLDEN lyrics...perfect humor for Newgrounds Holidays
But don't purposely make your voice that bad.
Adam Sandler can do it...but he's voice makes it sound funny...not bad.
Please...Your lyrics are pure GOLD.
But re-submit it with a good voice.
I'm sorry for the bad score...but I know that's what you need to do.
That sounded very nice...
Though it would be nice to have some "translations" + "lyrics"
Other than that...it was a wonderful cultural experience to listen to music from Garoua, North Cameroun.
It sounds wonderful....but I want to know what your singing about.
I know some parts are in english...but I can't understand the rest.
thank you very much for your comments.
the song is about love for a girl (fatima), the title should sound like "with your love you made me lose my mind". The language is fulfulde. Unluckily i don't have a translation in english here, but I'll sent it soon as a private message. Here's the part in english:
You caught me in a warm black night
just like those pit-a-pat dreams that pass sometimes
there had to be something attractive in you
perhaps the spotless charm of the things so pure
wake up my dormant desires
and I will try to leave you a trace of mine
waiting for the rain to come
singin'ide ma-da odo sakkli am
Sounds like Gorillaz: Space Monkeys
I'll be honest...it isn't my kind of music...
It's very "NEW"
You have to listen to it a few times to feel the mood.
But I prefer "local" beats.
Still...I do know an audience in Europe and some parts of the USA that would appreciate this allot. Especially with shrooms (LOL)
But if you have the right image association...this music will be associated with the awesome animation and therefore be more appealing.
Are you going to make a music video out of this someday?
It would have to be very trippy...yet appealing in it's visuals and colors.
But definitely include space...
Things I think of when listening to this...
-Mushrooms
-Space
-Candy Star (the Japanese little balls of colored sugar from Spirited Away)
-Snake Noodles
-Math Equations that turn into stick figures
-A purple ocean that changes to blue...then yellow
-Bunny Girls
-and....George Clooney
Lol that's close enough to what i had in mind thanks.
I find myself relaxed...
yet exploring a world that is unfamiliar to me...
You've got that
"Me Bill"
flash movie feel to it.
A sense of caution stirs in me as I am listening to the calming sounds,,,tempting me to drop my guard.
thanks i try to put my listeners in a calm state of vibe
nice voice
What I'm hearing is a pleasant voice...
Not caring...just cruising...
Like you were singing this to yourself while walking down the park one day.
Since this is your first submission...why not impliment to a flash movie of you walking down a road...while the sun sets.
But if you wanna be a singer...I'm hearing a voice of a Goddess...only in baby steps.
Or you could just not care and disregard this...
Whatever.
Thank you very much!
DUDE! CHECK OUT WHAT WE DID WITH THIS SONG!
It's soooooo BAD-ASS
Most well known for House of 1000 Cats
It's got an action pack feel.
Does sound Euro Retro.
You'd make a good DJ for those raves at crazy European parties!
Take Note though, most ravers don't care about the music as much as getting their "EX-stasy" on. They be too drugged out to really care.
But you've got what it takes to be a DJ.
But depending on where you play...being a DJ isn't exactly profitable.
BUT is HELLA FUN.
I say this makes a decent loop
It's soothing...and relaxing...
But it wouldn't hurt to add a variety.
I like it...but it's not great.
It's like you got the first 25 seconds done right...but see if you can add more relaxing sounds to this...a tempo of soft beats...
Like...think of how rain drops would sound on an electric keyboard.
I saw that fight.
That has to be the most appropriate music for that boss fight.
There was a whole cornucopia of crazy cartoon images.
And that music is probably what inspired the boss fight.
Congratz
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