JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Narwhals Tune]

For the sake of not being part of the-phrase party

I have to say that this song is unstructured, and not clever in my opinion.

I feel that you simply make a beat in your music maker program then make a few simple phrases that match to the beat.

Now you did MUCH better in your previous flashes. But this one was a bit weak.

-At least a minute long would've been better
-A side story (ex: Magical Trevor or Melon had at least a story to follow up)
-It's like your mostly saying "Narwhales" which takes up at least 10 seconds.
-Seems like a filler for lack of lyrics.

The flash was good - song wasn't your best. But it matched well with your animation.

A nice quick laugh. But I wouldn't listen to this by itself.

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

You may not be a great singer...

but don't cut yourself short.

For your writing of this song is quite original.

You've covered practically every antics that a typical 80's cartoon with high morality value demonstrates.
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Your a fantastic writer and cartoonist/animator.

You have a unique sense of humor that is new and fresh and quite contagious.

You otta do cartoons professionally.

When your cartoons hit the TV....be sure to let me know an I'll DVR that piece of shit!

:D

[-Control: Mind-]

Hmm....needs to be in a game...

But...What kind of game?

Still...244 different patterns is a good thing.

Thanks for working so hard.

Waterflame responds:

No prob :D i used my midi controller aswell for some of the effects, live. so it was a hard task, but im trying to get better at working live with my music. hm what kind of game.. good question.. i cant really think of any right now. X) thanks!

[Girls Beat]

Not bad....

though no one likes a pushy artist.

Just don't worry about what others think of your work and just be concerned about how it sounds to "you".

Unless you're trying to impress someone. Then that's a whole another story.
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But I kinda see where these beats are going.

"Soft and Sweet...that can so have spontaneous moments of Attitude"

Thus creating the Girl Beat.

-Not that this implies as a sextet comment.

But rather I feel that though a girl is usually sweet, charming, and nice. That doesn't mean she doesn't have the ability to get angry at you. But as quick as those moments are...she is sweet again.

This is only MY impression.

I don't know what your original intentions are for the title "Girl-Beat"

but that is just My impression.
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Overall...sounds nice

-3 for a sense of frequent repetition.

MomoRocks411 responds:

Thanx, it's just a beat that I came up with one day. Actually somebody helped me. My cousin terri. but anyways, i'd agree with you.

[-Space pirates-]

Congratulations winning Audio Award of the Year

Tom Fulp made a mention of your music in the nominee's flash.

Congratulations.

This is a pretty catch tune.

[In a Dream (Demo)]

Meh...a bit repeatative...

But an overall good trance song.

But add variation next time...you know what I mean once you explore the other "better" ambient tracks out here on Newgrounds.
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For example...try listening to a few songs from an artist named "SBB" from Norway.

Really good and inventive stuff.

[Zelda - Donald Ducks Awakening]

Clever

It's something someone else wouldn't do...and that's what makes this song special.

Imagine Zelda Games and Movies replaced with Disney Characters.

Donald-Link
Daisy-Zelda
Bruto-Gannadorph
Mickey-Mindo
Minni-Saria
Goofy-All the Guards

The Flash Movie would be funny to watch and will give animators a chance to test their skills animating disney style.

Charmanzer responds:

exactly, like i said in my response above, i wanted to do something with this song that no one else has made. I think that a flash could be kinda cool =D thanks for your review

[TAWG - Prologue]

Not Bad

OH Canada...how awesome your rocks songs may be...

But seriously...you guys are almost ready to go on tour.

I wouldn't change a thing...

Except even for a proluge...I can imagine some lyrics fitting in here nicely.

[Kayner Weaves]

It could be that I like Ambient Music....

But every-time I listen to music...images form in my head.

I am imagining a Native American God weaving on a tapestry....the story unfolding that is the history of the Native American People...

He begins to weave...and slowly the images show...and an animation of these woven patterns comes to life as these figurines hunt, fish, ride, and live.

It would make a good flash...so find yourself an animator.
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Story by JakBaronKing

Psy-nigma responds:

I really enjoyed reading your journey to the song. This is what keeps me inspired to continue writing song compositions.

Thank you!

And yes I should try and find an artist to create a video for this track when it is finished.

P.s. I will post you when I release the final edit.