JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Amped Dust^DFT {DEMO}]

Good MAN! But I would change a few things.

At around 20 seconds...I was hoping to hear a BOM BOM BOM BOM bass beat sound you know...and makes it progressively louder...guitar...doesn't really fit in with this techno tune, but if you can make it work...you just as tallented as the Gorilaz ( and i mean that in a good way! Cause I think the Gorillaz rock!)

It also ends kinda short...crank this CRUNK UP Fo-Shizzle My Nizzle!

This track sounds kinda scary...perfect for Halloween Flashes!

Keep it up man...try my advice.

Darthfett responds:

I guess I should have made the guitar part loop more than once so that you can hear a bit more of it. It's just a demo right now, so It loops well, but I had to quick-add the ending on to submit. Thanks for the compliments and long review!
~Darthfett

[Love Is Over]

Needs a slight change in lyrics

but you could be just like Maroon 5 with sad songs like these. Keep it up! man! Maybe add a base

Gigawowski responds:

Yeah I've acutally had a really hard time writing happy songs. Just can't think of any lyrics. Anyway this song summarizes a year and a half of no/crappy relationships I've been writing it for a long time about stuff that actually happened. Thanks for the suggestion about a bass I was actually thinking some congo drums would be cool.

-Gigawowski

[Choose youre fighter!]

I would totally use this in a game!

Like when choosing a fighting character! Exactly GOod job, make it more than 20 seconds though, like maybe 40 second tune. Cause it gets annoying after a while, people need more time to choose their character, a chacty tune can sometimes help, but not a loop.

Liau responds:

thanks for the feedback! I was thinking the same thing this morning! I figured they'd be like me and just zip through the character select ^^ I'll have to tinker!

[Castlemania]

Good music, just a tad repeative

You can take it to an extent, but you really should make more tunes for this song. But other than that, it sounded just like a certain stage in Castlevania.

Good job. but not too much repatiation please.

Liau responds:

yeah, I only had the one riff to start with and wanted to put a beat to it ^^ I might develop it a bit...

[Eternal Thing]

Great music HATE the VOICE!

Please, it was sooo smooth, it reminds me of my beaches. But the chipmunk voice needs to go please! For the love of God please! It destroys the beautiful music. Replace it with a pretty girls voice. Resubmit and you will score highest points.

At the minutes 1:50 replace with male rapper voice. Like something fast talk.

It's soo smooth, just that voice is the only real obsticle.

Arnas responds:

That IS a girl's voice. But pitched up. This song has a part on it's own too. If you want to use Audacity you can cut that out easily

[Don´t Take Me There]

Great but Short!

Acid metal is only cool if it's at least 10 minutes long and makes your ears bleed and your soal cry for more like crack!

I love it, but it's too short. You've got tallent dude, USE IT!

Frostvind666 responds:

This was thought as some kind of interlude between songs. But it turned out like this. Maybe I can do another one like this but far longer than any of my other works here on Newgrounds.

Thanks for your review and raise your horns to the dark sky !!!