Found a few things wrong...but who cares!!!!
BAD PART
The xylophone needs to go...
The organ needs to go...
The Guitar needs some work after about 30 seconds and 45 seconds
The group singing is off key
What's up with the silent sounds around 2 minutes. I know what your trying to go for but its too soft.
GOOD PART
AWSOME LYRICS! and good for the lead singing voice...works well
(put the lyrics on the page)
PUNK ROCK MAN!!!
GREAT INTRO MIDDLE And FINISH
*If your a band...remember...your more than just friends....your a family...the most successful bands get along with eachother and will understand eachother if you need to let some guys go...
My Opinion....
Best song I've listened to at first click...It's an honor to be the first to Review this!
-Jak Baron King (aka King of the Barons)