JakBaronKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Defective]

A "Kiss Players" tribute.

Not Transformers most popular or rather...canon tribute.

Still, beautifully illustrated. Can't find anything wrong with it.

Nekow responds:

Means alot when coming from such a constructive critic as yourself. Thanks!

[Non sento niente.]

Oh, that is COOL man.

You've really expressed the emotions in this art piece.

And what's conflicting is the fact that his face plate is always looking sad.
He's not making the face, his face is made to look like that.

That way, it remains vague whether or not robots DO feel.

I don't quite get the glowing thing in the center. It doesn't even look realistic.
It looks like a crop-out circle.

Now...if you were to make it seem like the glow was starting to fade...it would appear as if the robot's soul was dying. As opposed to it burning brightly white. It's a center of focus that leaves me feeling rather distracted from the main focus which in my opinion, should be his face.

[N7]

No wonder he loves you <3

Mass Effect is like the best Space Odyssey Game ever!

This kind of tribute art really speaks out to dedicated fans.

You make me cry with joy! He is a luck man, a VERY lucky man.

[Team Fortress 2 Red Pixel]

Someone needs to make an 8 bit TF2

A side-scrolling multiplayer TF2 game!

All functions and character powers working only in 2D platform gameplay!

That would be AWESOME!

[The Red Player]

Ah...a "Deal with the Devil" concept art.

Very nice. And Oh man...look at those medallions?
Those are different country flags!
"No one is free from temptation".

It's so symbolic and haunting.
The "two-faces", the "missing teeth", "the medals".

I'm not sure how much symbolism you've intended, but I'm seeing quite a few good ones.

[P.knight]

That ain't a lizard.

It's more like a Kangaroo Knight!

Which is more Awesomer!

Final Fantasy always is trying to make some new type of anthropomorphic creature.

This is perfect artwork for some kind of RPG.

[War Paint]

MUCH MUCH BETTER!

I see you added the details where I thought they needed them.

Namely around the torso.

The child's handprint is a great tribute to MC's upcoming comic which features an autistic little boy.

The paint fading away hear his helmet shows age and wisdom!
The scars of battle from victories old!
His core burning brightly with vigor and might!

These are the qualities of the Mindchamber Robot!

Nekow responds:

Thanks for pointing out the flaws of the first one, it helped.

[Party of Seven]

Heheheh

I get it.

That's a pretty funny joke.

Not necessarily racist but Def' makes fun of fat people.

Rather this is better using a Sumo because they are 'trained' to be fat.

Funny man. Ever considered making comics submitted to magazines or the daily newspaper?

ToonHole responds:

My comics are in a couple college papers, but they don't pay any money. If you know anybody that pays, put them into contact with me! Otherwise, I've just been publishing them on my own website and around the net. Maybe somebody people would buy books of them that I self publish *crosses fingers really hard*

[Dizzyspin]

VERY GOOD MAN!

"Pressure"

I love the illustration's overall composition.

The tones used in comic books, the background patches, the facial expression and the accurate anatomy pushed to the mimetic expression of the actual word 'pressure'.

This is really really good. I can't offer any helpful advice.
*But don't let it go to your head!

If I could offer anything now that I look at it longer, wouldn't it be cool if his whole body was bend nearly 180 degrees flat?

That's just an aesthetic opinion, not important.

[Jazzy Dante]

nice, I bet you're a real hottie in person

Self-portraits are always a good sign of confidence. It allows us to be honest with ourselves and draw with just a 'hint' of extra comic book flair.

There's an expression..."If you were to be stuck on a deserted island, the only person you would have to get used to your own company."

I actually had a self-portrait once, but decided to delete it cause I felt it was 'too' exaggerated in muscle tone. I 'used' to be muscular. Now I'm a bit pudgy.

The artwork is anatomically correct, not too heavy on the shadowing where it may need it. Dramatic shadowing is what shines in comic book art.

And a crazier background would add distinction to your facial expression. Your appear calm, but the background could be bloodier.

VoicedPAINKILLER responds:

Lawl well yeah I honestly suck at backgrounds so I have to work on that WAY more.I hope I'll be able to get better and do so. I wanted to put more shadowing but I didn't do it I guess cause I was hurting after a while and I thought it would be too much. The expression isn't to my liking I should have worked at more but I have a very short attention span. But thank you again for the review luv.