JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[_-={Raw Energy}=-_]

Like a Techno version of Maddness.

Have you ever watched an anime called Grenaider? It kinda reminds me of that....

MaestroRage responds:

I have watched the first 8 episodes of Grenaider *Grenaidiar wasn't it?*, when it first came out. I never really got back to it after waiting for it to finish.

Well at least it was able to invoke a image, and thats what I hope to achieve with all my tracks :D! Thank you for your review, i'm glad you liked it!

[A Collection of Guilt]

Sounds like Metal to Me!

But needs quite time every now and then...like how Linkin Park does it you know...Cause it sounds like your doing certain beats over and over again! Where's the guitar solo...or the drum solo...It's good but a tad repeative now n then. not just at minutes 4:45...but every 3 minutes or so. For people to raise their lighters! or Cell phones...depends which generation your from.

Good job Though...7 minutes is perfect length for HARD COR METAL!

Goatchrist responds:

Linkin Park has no solos either ;) and there IS a solo in the song later on.

Thanks for the (somewhat weird) review :)

[Breath To The Beat]

Pretty Good Dog

With a bit of clean up and a bit longer, this could be one of many masterpieces. Make some variations of this and see what you can accomplish. Remember your only as well accomplished as you are "not" lazy.

[Nice Try]

Dog that was great! I listened to the whole thing!

It has it's repetetion only with more build up every 15 seconds. It's just right. But if you want to make this professional...you should listen to it again and make various variation copies. I'm sure you can make a single Masterpiece.

I wonder what you were thinking...It sure sounds dark and scary. Like Egyptians dancing with Anubus....or Dark Shawody Figures about to sacrafice an innocent.

Good Job-Perfect for upcomming Halloween!

I hope your still not pissed. Remember, Anger can block judgement and make us do things we can regret doing, and we can only blam ourselves for those actions because of our anger.

however, there is a way to diverge these unforseen actions...by distracting us with a hobby. And it seems your hobby is music. Good Job....you be surprised what bad thing can be turned into a good thing.

joncom responds:

Thanks for the tips and good advice. I'll try not to let anger make me do something I'll regret ;)

In the mean time, I'll keep at my music and try making the next mix even better!

Thanks for the review!

[Out and Beyond]

Dude! For being drunk that was not bad!

Though I wouldn't reccomend being drunk for alll your music writing. It was pretty good. It totally put me in a trance. But I think you should mix it up a little...see what you can do with it. And this time, try it without being drunk! Clear head...for clear listening. You know.

Good luck DOg.

[Bro#en SteP\e0]

Meh...it was okey...

It sort of repeats itself. That's what I wasn't very impress by. If you mix it up a little you will get higher scores. Techno has repetition, but that only part of it. You must keep the beat, but add on to the beat. Like 10 different kinds of beats if you want to be a master!

Good luck Dog. It was okay...but I think you can do better! :D-keep it up DOG!

[Max the Nano]

Sounds very peaceful in a electronic sort of way

But I feel it can go in seperate directions. One should stick to the styles of piano, the other more electronic. But then again, it sounds pretty good by itself. It reminds me of a sort of Electronic Version of Animal Crossing. You know...like if Animal Crossing had more Robots than animals.

Just a thought!

[Dreams of Eternal Torment]

This sounds like Real Good Metal!

But it needs just a bit of clean up! Keep up the Good work...with enough cleaning up and you should play this live!

Goatchrist responds:

I WOULD play this live if it wasn't just me alone :P

[in dust trees]

Remind me of Indians running with wolves in forest

Neds to be a bit longer. With more drums, and maybe a flute! See what you can do! I look forward to your work.

snayk responds:

lolflute

[Super Mario kart Rainbow Road]

It does sound good...except for that boing boing.

That boing boing sound kinda interfears with the rest of the ensamble. But the rest is quite pleasant. That boing boing sound is kinda annoying to be honest.

Good job but please consider what I've written.

Stardart responds:

Allright I'll keep it in mind...