JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ne wer]

I find myself relaxed...

yet exploring a world that is unfamiliar to me...

You've got that
"Me Bill"

flash movie feel to it.

A sense of caution stirs in me as I am listening to the calming sounds,,,tempting me to drop my guard.

iLogick responds:

thanks i try to put my listeners in a calm state of vibe

[You Are My Sunshine]

nice voice

What I'm hearing is a pleasant voice...

Not caring...just cruising...

Like you were singing this to yourself while walking down the park one day.

Since this is your first submission...why not impliment to a flash movie of you walking down a road...while the sun sets.

But if you wanna be a singer...I'm hearing a voice of a Goddess...only in baby steps.

Or you could just not care and disregard this...

Whatever.

TikTokClockworkGirl responds:

Thank you very much!

[_-=[Corrupting Ruin]=-_]

Wow! What a vivid story

someone otta do a flash based on this music piece.

See if you can find someone willing to do all that work though.

MaestroRage responds:

Well the song was made for a director frend of mine who will animate it. I guess we'll have to wait and see how it turns out.

Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it :]!

[Only in Dreams...]

A nice little ambient track

plays the music as the name implies...

A peaceful dream..free to explore all areas of the subconscious.

Then it bursts into Hard-Core beats...but still remains peaceful.

Dreamhard responds:

Hit the nail on the head!

The idea behind it is, In my dreams I can get what I want, but in reality what I want I can't seem to get.

[Yes, I Do Have Homework]

I can picture a movie

the beginning taps could be the pencil of the student tapping his desk.

Only to unlock a new dimention and fall into a portal of numbers, words, and history.

Like a trippy way to finish your homework. Like how Calvin and Hobbes does it. Calvin is like...doing his homework and something wierd happens.

Think about it.

theta4 responds:

Uh...I suppose. I just needed a title, so I thought of the first thing that came to my mind: "I've got homework to do..."

[Happy Valley(loop)]

I think you didn't put enough effort in this

But I can understand if your new to this...

It doesn't sound appealing (to me) I cannot say the same for others who hear this.

What you have here is repetition...and a scale...but that's it.

can't you find more variation?

I'm sure you can...I hope you find this review constructive

A low score doesn't mean I hate "you"

It should instead be constructive and appealing.

A reason not to feel prideful but rather humble.

dondrummer responds:

thanks man, this song wasnt one of my best, i understand that so thanks 4 the advice chek my uther stuff 2!!

[Writtin In Blood]

I hope this passes judgment

Cause I think this is pretty good!

A sort of Japanese techno beats...or maybe Egyptian?

Perhaps if you took on the approach of using a shamisen, japanese banjo, inbetween the beats...that would sound really good.

Right now is seems just a bit cluttered.

Caitlinsboy responds:

Yeah this track was more of an expiriment then an actual song. lol, but thanks for the review!

[Final Summer]

Very Ambient

I imagine tons of bubbles in the sky...popping and making those interesting sounds.

Such a lovely cord of bubbles that it brings much joy to those who care to pop them just for that jovial tune.

A nice and relaxing beat for Ambient Techno lovers.

Michael425 responds:

yeah, I was goin for a really calm tune with this one.

Thanks for your interesting review.

[The End Of All To Come]

It would be so sweet if you actually played guitar

Cause this sounds pretty darn good!

Heavy Metal and shit like that...this doesn't sound flawed at all in my opinion.
Give or take a tad repeative at times...
however there is a nice touch to adding a sense of calm around 3 minutes...

But what about singing?

Singing about Anguish...Pain...Suffering...Struggle ...Strength...SURVIVAL!

"I will survive this cold and aweful night! My repugnant soul cries to death! But My will shall get me though! I shall live! Or I shall die! It doesn't matter as long as I TRY!"

something like that?

F4c3Fuck3r responds:

Haha thanks bro, vocals are on the way!

And I am also redoing the guitar tone. I want all the songs to match, I will eventually be selling them onto a CD. I've got more to upload, stay tuned!