JakBaronKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[WS - Zatoichi Tribute]

Awesome...thinking about adding lyrics?

It kinda reminds me of a MF Doom track...sort of like MadVillian.

It has that sort of comic book feel...probably because of the anime backdrop sounds.

Peace Bro! Congratz making top five this week.

war-spawn responds:

Thanks a lot bro. I was thinking about it, and most likely I'd get Mercury on this track if I do decide to have vocals on it.

[crystal caverns cascade]

For a First Submission...it's pretty darn good!

Though I feel that some artist do it better...It's a sort of Ambient with Hip-Hop sounds.

My only gripe is that if you play it lound...some of the pitches are a bit too loud and sharp.

Perhaps if you toned it down a bit...it would be perfect...

For either for Meditation or an Awesome Flash Game

nostromer responds:

Yeah man, Your totally right. Its a flaw in the track that I realized early on. I'll be sure to go through my newer creations and test them at the highest velocities.

Thanks for that dude, enjoy.

[Perseverance MK2]

a nice quite ambient sound..with an air of mystery

Then it goes all FAST pace!

Like your riding a motercycle.

Great for those rushing scenes in games...

my only gripe was the repetition. You need to mix it up some more.

Bob-Music responds:

Thanks for your review, and you may be right, perhaps I need to shorten it down a little

[Hitchhiker's Guideto the Galaxy]

Wow dude...you've been busy...and HOW!

You should pitch this idea to the BCC. I hear they might make a second movie or rather RE-DO the ENTIRE series.

Some great works of Fiction should NEVER be forgotten.

MAN! I can totally image this being the Theme Song for the Opening or Ending.

(On a personal note: I like the Newer looking Robot vs the Older One. But he Does make a Cameo in the Movie. The Old Robot stared in the Old BBC TV series. You can probably still catch it on youtube.)

It's probably the most intelligent/bizarre work of science fiction this world has yet to read/listen/watch.

SkyMarshall responds:

Hehe yeah, this franchise IS a work of genious - no doubt about that :)
Thanks for the reciew man ... I'll go watch the movie now!

[Kirby's Dreamland 3 A New Day]

A nice rendition of the original track.

I especially like the heavy beats of the bass sounds.

I can picture this track being used in a techno-looking stage of kirby.

Full of blinking buildings, robots, ect.

Kirby could be flying a sort of space ship or something...

I hope someone uses this track in their flashes soon.

Brakzias responds:

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

[Untitled Guitar Demo]

Very Nice.

Good for an opening of a sad song of love.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks!

good idea, by the way...

[TSH - Odd Man Out]

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Thumbs up Dude!

That was like 90% perfect!

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks :D

[TSH - Elias]

almost perfect

I'm sure you can find the fix ups on your own...

Mainly the drums with it's lower beat (2x fast beat on the feet is too much, should have a moderate tempo to match with the rest of the song.)

It gets a little bit too fast around 2 minutes...

Very few mistakes...some fix up is all you need.

It's intro is very good...and
It ends very nicely.

I'm pretty darn sure you'll make it as a real band one day. Just keep at it!

Every song you submit has fewer and fewer mistakes...it just proves you've got what it takes!

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thank you so much! i hope to improve and make stuff even better than this song, even if it takes a little time. again, thanks! :D

[TSH - Where You Are]

Gettin' Better (Thumbs up)

Good intro...nice an slow acoustics...even motion...the flute in the background is a nice touch...

But around 30 seconds the guitar kinda get's sloppy.

But it gets better after that.

Your voice is definitely ALLOT better!

But "DO YOU KNOW (drop down fast sound....) HOW I GO!! IT was just a BAD DREAM..." (Needs more even flow) "WHEN YOU FALL ASLEEP!

Basically you need to have good flow. Like a water flow.

Powerful lyrics! Love it!

fix that high stuck sound around 3:18...

Remember...you can fix your pieces...and you don't always have to submit if your not sure if it's perfect...unless you just want to know how well or what could be improved.

My advice...once you have enough songs for an album...FIX them....listen to them again and again and again! And fix where you think it could use some changin.

All your songs have such original and great lyrics.

If you ever go pro...Don't let the fame get the best of you...focus on spreading a good message through your music...give considerable amounts of money to charity (secretly) and watch out who you date.

Remember...IF I may preach here...

You will not be entrusted with the Blessings of Heaven unless you can prove you can be responsible with your blessings here on Earth.

Do not let the riches of the world corrupt you...do not let your talents make you arrogant. You do music for the glory of all that is good...how you express yourself in your heart...and how you can make people understand feelings.

I know you will be great envoys of music. You might inspire...make someone change a lifestyle....help people understand.

You do it all for the sake of love of music.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thank you so much!

since this will be on the album, we could probably take this and put it back into the studio and re-record some of the guitar parts, stuff like that.

again, thanks!

[Rose At Nightfall]

This reminds me allot of Kingdom Hearts 2

I suppose this is good for those action packed scenes that often involve a big chase or speeding up.

It sounds perfect except I feel that the repetition of the same sound right after 29 seconds is a bit much...it should go directly to the next set of sounds and just flow with it.

NemesisTheory responds:

Yup, that would probably fit too!

And yes, it probably could've used some more variation but I felt there was enough of that, although I do agree with that the trumpets gave off that repetivity-feeling because it soared above the rest of the stuff every few seconds. Won't happen again without a reason. :p

I'm glad you liked it, I agree with your critique and will definitely handle that stuff in the future! :)

Thank you for the review!