JakBaronKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Once When I Was A Kid SE]

If you need to confess something like that....

even your friends don't need to hear it.

You need to consider how they feel about it too.

Then you would just put them in an awkward situation.

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LOL - this flash has reminded me of my friends and how they used to confess 'awakard' stuff like that to me.

It is best to keep them to yourself XD

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I loved the animation and the voice acting.

Both were high scores!

[Hard Luck Clover]

The heck was that?

Though the animation was decent, you did not express the story well enough.

I got the basic story down, but it seemed too rushed.

This could've been more expressive if you invested at least 4 minutes worth of animation work.

mrnihil responds:

4 minutes of this? you're more patient than you should be.

6/10

[Math Debate]

Woah - someone broke a nerve...

Short but I knew people who would simply break down over stupid jokes like that.

I sympathize entirely, but be cautious who you act like a jack-ass around.

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Great animation, good use of colors. Very good animation and voice acting.

[Only Slightly]

This was extremely random to say the least.

It's not my cup of tea but it does serve it's purpose well.

Though the animation and voicing could've been a bit better. I can see taking this concept to a whole new level of humor.

[Bang!!!]

I favorited this one a long time ago ^_^

It's quite a logical statement.

"Out of nothing - nothing comes"

Though personally I feel that God had something to do with the Big-Bang.

[Lightning!!!]

Very random and follows off track of being educate

But it was fun all the same.

Though I strongly feel your narration could use improvement.

Don't forget to emphasize your voice when times become excitable or violent.

Your voices is rather monotone. That's the only real down side.

[Jim Learn Mathematization]

Short - but cute.

I was hoping it be more so.

It can be longer. But do what you like I suppose.

I enjoy this character jim and the invisible narrator. I think this could be evolved more so.

Like those old 'How to' Goofy cartoons.

[Seven Eight Nine]

A perfect play-off a perfect pun.

Why is 6 afraid of 7? Cause 7 8 9!

I so enjoyed the pun to "pie" what do you know about being "rational"

If this indeed is going to be a flash movie, it'll be hard to put more puns in.

[Sod Houses]

A bit nonsensical...but informative

I honestly saw no point to the viewing of this flash other than it was educational to a certain extent.

This segment would serve well as a filler for a Ren & Stimpy cartoon or any sort of show where all it needs is a filler.

As a homework assignment however. You could've been less concise and more exuberant. Cause it was kinda boring actually.

I'll bet it was just an excuse to practice your animation skills rather than doing a paper. In which case I understand 100%.

[Math]

Very unique

It reminds me of a certain art style of using letters and numbers to form pictures.

It's a really articulate flash. Though I feel it ends suddenly