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Babies Hate Ugly People

2010-02-05 06:46:34

Quite Good!

I dare say you could tackle your local Newspaper.

This is a genuinely charming comic strip.

I'm serious! I would love to read your comic strips on a daily basis of black and white and a colored page for sundays.

And the name of your strip could be something catchy - like - "The Sab-Sisters"

Sabtastic responds:

lol aww well thanks! :D
It's funny you say that, because I had a second idea about Mel's creepy art ESP, but I thought it would be overkill to do two 'sab sisters' comics in one week. o:

I appreciate the encouragement, though!
Thanks again!! c:

Bowser

2010-01-28 15:05:52

wat if Bowser had a gun?

Then Mario is pretty much "fucked!"

Great comedic essence in your art as always.

Gonzossm responds:

that D.E. is filled with Bullet bill rounds. Get the mario reference :B... fail XD

Attack Mode

2010-01-26 16:03:24

Neat and perfectly matched with M-Bot's character.

But I think he needs ears. Sonar Ears that are pricked like a bad-ass Doberman.

Cause right now he kinda looks like a mutated hump-backed crocodile.

If he had those ears, the K-9 unite look would be instant connection to the viewer.

His chin could have slit holes that act as a dog's nose. He'll be able to pick up scent as well, trace amounts of oil and skin that have the DNA of his next victims.

Almost as if he would look better if his head was upside down, so the chin becomes his nose and gives the defining features of a dog's snout. And the ears would flip up.

The arched on his back is good because he could also be a rescue unite, carrying pedestrians and wounded away from a crossfire. It can also double as a saddle seat for riders such as Pico.

And just for kicks...why not have the ability to shit grenades/landmines?
(Okami reference - exploding poop)

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I would love to see M-Bot's animated transformation like you did with the tank.

Idea - you should make a postcard featuring all the Bots. Including G-Bot, F-Bot, and your version of Angry Faic Bot.

MindChamber responds:

Ill try the ears, as long as it doesnt look too silly , I like the vents idea for the nose though, thats cool. Funny you mentioned crocodile. his k9 mode was orginally inspired from a nasty crocodile clip I seen on the web.. So i kept the croc face but made him fit more into another animal, a boar , but people wouldn't make the connection (Boar=pig, pig the slang term for cop) K-9 unit works much better.
Ill give the ears a shot. oh and i do plan on making a group shot of all the bots for our next poster. yay.

Honey Flash