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[Red Rocket Tours]

Now this is a cartoon character

Nothing say a kid - adolescent series with mild flirtatious dialogue than a sexy spy girl genre.

Do I hint a presence of your personality embedded in the illustration?

PixelCake responds:

Of course darlin' every part of me goes into each doodle I pop out ;) Thanks!

[OceanBird]

Awesome front page Mandie!

You could totally get an animation job at places like Renegade Studio's.

I mean, I know thats not your primary career choice but all the same, you can always apply part time.

The fact that you got front page is proof of your artistic talent.

Imagine if your style of art was animated! Now that would be cool.

PixelCake responds:

HOLY CRAP I WAS FRONT PAGED?! I didn't even realize that!

...I need to learrn Flash first :D Thank you

[As the Sun Falls]

Pretty Cool man

Pretty cool.

I otta post my robot I drew.

But the blades seem kinda short don't cha think?

And the stuff on his back seems confusing to the eye.

[Prince(ss) Alse and Dee Dee]

Revolutionary Girl Utena inspired no?

Haha! Total lesbian suggestions.

Nah it's very pretty, but what's the deal with that series? My cousin was into it, and i watch it with her while babysitting...God...I must be a insensitive male cause that show was just not doing it for me.

But no doubt that Chiho Saito is a brilliant artist who makes beautiful art.

You leaning in that direction of what's it called..."Shojo"

PixelCake responds:

I've heard of utena but never saw it! The girl who wanted to grow up to be a prince...well Alse doesn't like girly things and she'd kill you if you tried to get her into a dress...XD
That's why she was given the only male part...her class is also all girls :D

[Azuna'hyjas]

Rachet and Clank inspiration no?

You need to provide more details to your characters. That includes a character's front, back, side, and pose.

Also you should include a listing of their facial features.

Do what they do on those special extras on those dvds.

that's how you look professional!

SYRSA responds:

Details? Woah, haven't i slammed on enough gadgets on her?

This is just a basic pose.

[Meat Boy]

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Who ever said 'jumpin' high is a lousy ability!

Oh I can't wait to play, I hope you win dude!

idiot-monarch responds:

Thanks! Glad you like it man :)

I didn't win, unfortunately :c

[teatime]

She gonna get raped, I just know it!

Really cool sense of morbid humor my man.

Keep up the good work!

[Dad, meet Mom.]

I've always wanted to draw that idea...

Although to be perfectly honest...my first idea was to have Dad go on a rampage into a lone woman's home, cut her stomach open, and find a baby boy inside where he readily adopts him as his son.

She really should have a weapon though. Maybe a Weed-Wacker hence that Dad uses a chainsaw and son uses a Jack knife.

And is it too much to think she would look funnier if she wore a kitchen apron?
That or maybe 'some' hair should be out of her rubber mask. Like a pony tail or just a short length.

But definitely a weapon as the whole family has one.

Sabtastic responds:

You're TOTALLY RIGHT.
lol It crossed my mind to give her an apron or hair, or something, but part of that just seemed too ... 'get in the kitchen and make me a sammich'. haha

It would suit the character though. The weed whacker especially. XD
Thanks!

[Bombs Away!]

Bomber Man ~ Bomber Man

Does whatever a Bomber does!

With a Bomb - in his hand - blastin' evil - where they stand!

Look OUT! ~ Here comes the Bomber man!

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Do you recall a spin-off the bomber man game series called "Atomic Bomberman?"

That kinda reminds me of that.

But I think Hasbro has "blamed" their iconic bomberman.

This guy needs his own game and movie.

[dee dee parade]

She should be wearing pink.

Pink is all girls like her should wear. Cause she's the stereotype of a typical dumb blonde.

Sure her clothing style should change according to the season. But PINK is the way to go for Dee Dee's character.

It'll make her distinctive to her audience who read the future comics.

PixelCake responds:

The PINK is the one next to the blue and green ._.
Bubbles from the PPG was another dumb blonde and she wore blue :B -shot-