JakBaronKing's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sling Junior]

Heh...its kinda cute!

A Booger Blob....thingie....really cute...like the arrow ability.

[Bee Jeez]

A Cute Game!

Young ones will really like this. But i think the mechanics can be a bit smoother. I'm not one to give specifics...I just believe it can be smoother.

[mass tutorials]

Your songs are great, it's also informative.

However...no don't take this the wrong way

But your still not makeing some thinks work. Like the Code for example, not legible, or cannot copy paste. It's hard to make a tutorial...but if people can't read the tutorial you have a problem.

Instruction manuals are not written in a "Sand" like font. it needs to be easier to read in order for the reader to understand.

Music adds a nice touch but it's the least important part of a tutorial flash.

You must have spent hours...maybe even days making this...but believe me...Tutorials need to be better stuctured in order to be successful.

Check out Moosh tutorial on making Anime and you will see what I mean.

-Good luck and don't be discouraged...part of life is knowing you can always try again!

[Block Defender v1.1]

Good Concept, needs better work.

Your concept of a tetris invaders game is quite good. But it needs more...you know...for starters, some sound, power-ups, and maybe a good story.

Other than that, you did pretty good.

[Super Pilot]

THIS CRUNK IS THE CRUNK FO_SHIZZLE!

I love how smooth and easy it is to play. But what would really make this shooter more impressive are powerups. Be creative and make something cooler than Raiden X series. Like grappling Arms, Homming Missles, Drop Bombs, Spike Grenades.

Ever watch the Swat Cats. That cartoon displays a whole range of creative fighterJet weaponary.

[Psychos From Space]

HA! Makes me Laugh! :D

Justin Timberlke gets axed by a Space Clown! FUnny! Good flash, maybe some powerups or musicOH.... some 16-bit sound effects like from MR.Game&Watch. That will really make this flash funnier! Oh and he can say something stupid. Like =OH NO! or AX in my eyes!

[Super Mouse Game 3]

Not Bad, but don't forget the right-click cheat!

There is a way to disable this ability. But yours is pretty good, I like the music too! Perhaps if there was a reward at the end to encourage people to play more. For example, H Games allow nudie pics while others reveal seccret cheats to other games you make. In either case these mouse games provide constant re-trying if the motivation to do so is there.

Flashsubmit responds:

ok, i don't think ill be having nude pics, but ill learn how to do passwords so i have those in my other upcoming games.

[Red Baron]

It's time to give this game a proper review.

Red Baron is a Newgrounds classic of the hack/slash genre.
The character art design is wholly unique and bad ass.

It was my favorite to play back in my old middle school / high school days.

One could consider this a prior inspiration to the later Castle Crasher game.

I would love to see Red Baron revived in some capacity.

[Rob Vs. Bob 3]

Nice try, not good enough

Needs to be smoother! Improve your skills. And having to control arrow keys and mouse is not a good combo. Try AWSD. That way labtop players can play.

get 3 for effort