JakBaronKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[When the World Ended]

Da HAHAHA Fuck yes!

So ironic, so tragic, so hillarious.

And that poor poor nerd.

XD

[Monster Dance Party]

OH Pen Ward.

You have a deliciously creative imagination.

[Cadaver]

My friend is studying to be a Doctor.

He loved this!

If the dead really could come back. I hope they are as kind hearted as this cadaver.

[The World Ending]

It's 2012 for the world of Flash.

AtroxChobatsu responds:

And I feel fine.

[Problem With Eyelashes]

This used to happen to me so often.

I actually had to use eyelash curlers for a month.

[BiteyCastle Christmas]

Like I said....dingle legs Santa.

dingle dingle dingle all the way buahhahahah (collapse)

Gotta get one for my tree this year so i can get drunk and collapse too.

[Fiery Christmas]

I miss dangly legs Santa.

dingle dingle dingle dingle.

chluaid responds:

dingle legs, dingle legs, dingle all the way.
*dingle* giggle *dingle* laugh *dingle* scream *dingle* collapse

[Kerslash Episode 1]

Shows allot of effort and animation tallent. Did you animated it all yourself. That's allot of hard work.

Though your script to me feel a little uneventful. I feel that if you were to make an intro episode, we should at least know more and start to care about these characters. 15 minutes longer would enabled that. It felt allot like "flash cards" to me. this is her, this is him, okay let's move on.

Also, I don't quite understand the 'lore' of this world. That could've been expressed a bit more. Though I suppose you wish for people to read your web comic.

Granted it is the first episode. Let's see how it develops. The your framing could use 'some' fine tuning. I would suggest using Flash in combination with 'after-effects' or perhaps in combination with 3D as you show in your demo reel.

To get people to really care, you need to WOW them. And I mean really WOW them.

I'm not an animator nor a writer. I'm merely an audience with honesty.

But good luck in your future projects.