HAHAHA!
Oh God this makes me laugh.
This is the first time I've EVER seen an Octopus Pelt.
I mean..that doesn't even seem remotely sanitary!
But what I would suggest is to stick to armor that fits his theme.
He could have hammers made from coral and armor made from sea-shells.
His loincloth could be made from sea-weed.
He might even look good with some Polynesian style Tattoos.
glad you got a kick out of him!
actually i kind of wanted dogsword to be really worldy and get his stuff from all over the place.
but man, I LOVE polynesian tattoos, i love how the different items represent things and they look so amazing. thanks for the comment!
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A "Steam" golem...interesting.
I would imagine that something small and good with mechanics is actually inside controlling the huge beast.
Maybe it's a whole mini-army of furry imps that controls the mechanical suit.
haha that would be pretty cool, i think in the comics its just this guy though.
thanks for the highscore pal!
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I dunno...I don't see how this works.
I mean...if that thing can crawl on it's own, then he'd be facing backwards.
And how does the scorpion sting if the guy's head is stinger? The head-but won't really work on enemies his own size. It's too long.
I know he's your favorite character and you've redesigned him accordingly.
I just don't see how this villain functions properly.
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Now...if you wan't MY opinion.
Somehow he needs to be more like a transformer.
The scorpion should be like body armor...wrapping around his back.
The main claws covering his forearms and the small legs acting gripping around this torso.
The tail could cover his groin.
Then he can instantly switch into scorpion mode by laying flat. It acts as a means of defense when he's surrounded by enemies and he can dig his way underground to escape an ambush.
that is a pretty sweet redesign, i was kinda just going for laughs on mine haha.
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Awesome! he dips his swords in demon phlem!
Though, I can't imagine him gettin anywhere fast with that creature.
Though, given his lethargic nature, I doubt the beast tamer really cares how long the trip takes...just as long as he doesn't have to walk :P
Is the riding beast have a huge nose? Or beady eyes?
Cause if it was huge nostrils...then it would be funny if the beast was encouraged to crawl by a having a chicken leg tethered to a stick and rope.
haha yeah those are big nostrils. a chicken would be pretty tempting for a quardopus, but i think that grudd can coax the beast into locomotion without chicken tricks!
thanks for the review!
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Hmm..this one's just a 'little' offensive.
See, here's the thing. I get you like to use Sumo Wrestlers as a fat joke plot device. But, culturally they are viewed with much higher respect. Seriously, I met one, you DO NOT want to mess with one. They are like...indomitable.
I would avoid using too many plot devices that poke fun at a particular culture.
But you are free to publish anything you want.
Just understand there 'are' consequences to well....everything. It doesn't matter what your intentions were or not, publishing anything will always gauge a reaction.
But I just hope you're not 'intentionally' poking fun at sumo-werestleres.
If you want my opinion, I think you should focus getting 'eaten by rats', a demise best reserved towards a general fat person as a message 'against' being overweight through gluttony. Like...that's the karma of purposefully ignoring one's health and indulging in being overweight.
I know my 'father' would take offense to this as it appears to him that you are attacking Japanese. Although, he gets offended very easily.
You get what I'm saying right?
Leave humorous racial discrimination out of your comics. No matter how minuscule it seems. It's just a suggestion.
I totally get where you're coming from. Although this isn't intended to be racist and I have the highest respect for all cultures, for the context of the joke we made the person a sumo wrestler purely on the superficial fact of their size. In reality, sumo are agile and strong fighters. But that's the humor of this comic: it's absurdity. Thanks for sharing your opinions : )
A "Kiss Players" tribute.
Not Transformers most popular or rather...canon tribute.
Still, beautifully illustrated. Can't find anything wrong with it.
Means alot when coming from such a constructive critic as yourself. Thanks!
MUCH MUCH BETTER!
I see you added the details where I thought they needed them.
Namely around the torso.
The child's handprint is a great tribute to MC's upcoming comic which features an autistic little boy.
The paint fading away hear his helmet shows age and wisdom!
The scars of battle from victories old!
His core burning brightly with vigor and might!
These are the qualities of the Mindchamber Robot!
Thanks for pointing out the flaws of the first one, it helped.
Heheheh
I get it.
That's a pretty funny joke.
Not necessarily racist but Def' makes fun of fat people.
Rather this is better using a Sumo because they are 'trained' to be fat.
Funny man. Ever considered making comics submitted to magazines or the daily newspaper?
My comics are in a couple college papers, but they don't pay any money. If you know anybody that pays, put them into contact with me! Otherwise, I've just been publishing them on my own website and around the net. Maybe somebody people would buy books of them that I self publish *crosses fingers really hard*
nice, I bet you're a real hottie in person
Self-portraits are always a good sign of confidence. It allows us to be honest with ourselves and draw with just a 'hint' of extra comic book flair.
There's an expression..."If you were to be stuck on a deserted island, the only person you would have to get used to your own company."
I actually had a self-portrait once, but decided to delete it cause I felt it was 'too' exaggerated in muscle tone. I 'used' to be muscular. Now I'm a bit pudgy.
The artwork is anatomically correct, not too heavy on the shadowing where it may need it. Dramatic shadowing is what shines in comic book art.
And a crazier background would add distinction to your facial expression. Your appear calm, but the background could be bloodier.
Lawl well yeah I honestly suck at backgrounds so I have to work on that WAY more.I hope I'll be able to get better and do so. I wanted to put more shadowing but I didn't do it I guess cause I was hurting after a while and I thought it would be too much. The expression isn't to my liking I should have worked at more but I have a very short attention span. But thank you again for the review luv.
Wait...wouldn't they be male then?
I'm just saying...cause then that would be even more hilarious.
Are you calling sea horses gay?
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