Sou's got manga skills yo
But too much color...it's a bit busy in the background...
You need to learn to direct your attention to the characters.
Ex: Forget that lazy effect in the background of zig-zags. And Make the petals less hard. They should be softer.
It'll help direct the attention to the characters.
I see what you're saying. I felt proud of this but I did kinda have that feeling I was either missing something or something was off. I took your advice and it does look better, and the characters stand out a bit.
Manga Studio 4, as far as I know, does not have any way to soften images. So I have lowered the opacity a bit. Since a lot of the picture is dark colors the petals still stand out.
A good use of ink.
I love it how people can make awesome effects with just the humble pen.
But the shading of the character and the building in front seems just a bit off...
If it's night...shouldn't the front part of his body and face be all...dark...cuz the light is comming from 'behind' him?
It really more of reflects the way I'm drawing the comic... I honestly don't care for shading... I only do shading to add detail and I'm bad at it...
AAAAAAAhhh-SUMM!
Dude...I pick up crabs on my beach ALL the time.
This puts an artistic perspective on crabs to a whole nother level
i KNOW RIGHT? coz now they can go forward as well as side to side lol
Should be a Badge Pin given out at conventions
Seriously...It's round...I'd stick a needle through an Expensive Suit just to show it off.
That's awesome I never thought about it like that. Thanks for the review :)
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