JakBaronKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nik'era The first sub villian]

Nice...she's got plant arms.

So is it kinda like the Ben 10 plant alien?

Where her arms can like...fuse with all plants and mutate to do her bidding? Or even fuse with her body to create a sort of monster?

Maybe she can have a sweet side and have flowers blossom out of her hair.

And it can also have a nasty side...her back side of her head can open up like a venus fly trap. She chould very well have 2 faces.

When she sits politely (like in Japanese style)..her arms could blossom around her and she sits in the center of the pedals of a huge Lilly Flower.

beastkid7 responds:

Wow ...I didn't know you had such a big imagination man. She could be like that chick from revenge of the fallen that . . .nah I don't want to spoil transformers if you havn't seen it yet.

oh and as you can see the art portal is now working for me!

[Sharp Dressed Aberrants]

Sou's got manga skills yo

But too much color...it's a bit busy in the background...

You need to learn to direct your attention to the characters.

Ex: Forget that lazy effect in the background of zig-zags. And Make the petals less hard. They should be softer.

It'll help direct the attention to the characters.

Son23 responds:

I see what you're saying. I felt proud of this but I did kinda have that feeling I was either missing something or something was off. I took your advice and it does look better, and the characters stand out a bit.

Manga Studio 4, as far as I know, does not have any way to soften images. So I have lowered the opacity a bit. Since a lot of the picture is dark colors the petals still stand out.

[Bereavement Cover]

A good use of ink.

I love it how people can make awesome effects with just the humble pen.

But the shading of the character and the building in front seems just a bit off...

If it's night...shouldn't the front part of his body and face be all...dark...cuz the light is comming from 'behind' him?

JoSilver responds:

It really more of reflects the way I'm drawing the comic... I honestly don't care for shading... I only do shading to add detail and I'm bad at it...

[Crab on a tricycle]

AAAAAAAhhh-SUMM!

Dude...I pick up crabs on my beach ALL the time.

This puts an artistic perspective on crabs to a whole nother level

Malakuko responds:

i KNOW RIGHT? coz now they can go forward as well as side to side lol

[Custom NG Star Tank Logo]

Should be a Badge Pin given out at conventions

Seriously...It's round...I'd stick a needle through an Expensive Suit just to show it off.

Corpsecrank responds:

That's awesome I never thought about it like that. Thanks for the review :)

[Cartoon Planet]

I love ya Baby

I like the way you walk..
I really like it...I like the way you talk...
I really love it...when you tickle me..ahHAHAHAHA...

STOP IT!!!!

Somebody left a cake...out in the rain....OH NO!!!
I was gonna eat that cake..but now its all wet and I don't think I wanna eat it no more

I love ya Baby
I love yer' little dog
I really like her..hey I even like her fleas...
The only problem...is when they keep...biting me ME ~~~~~~~

Hey...where you going?

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That was the BEST show ever.

Brack is still my main Helmet Brother.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

zooooraaaaakkk can you heeeeeeelp meeeee
SURE KID
JUST TELL OL ZORAK

[_r]

Dude...this should be "fine art"

Change your category - cuz this is you being TOO humble.

SpikeVallentine responds:

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL BRO!
loooool!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahaaahaha

Ilustration's fine enough.

and i've got a lot to grow and learn . this is nothing yo.-

[Spongebob]

It should be the coverart for Sponge-bob Sickpants

Assuming they get the rights for a DVD.

LOL

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

you'd be surprised how many spongebob dvd's there are