JakBaronKing's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wife Quest]

It already has a perfect plot for an anime

Consider making a pitch bible for an animation studio or make a manga to eventually be turned into an anime.

[Schmuck'em Chuck'em Robots]

You just invented the newest Battle Royal Game.

It's sorta like that snake game where you eat other snakes and get bigger and then dominate the rest of the world.

I can imagine it now...

You enter a battle royal of 100 equally size small robots. Then you proceed to beat the crap out of each other by means of mele or projectile attacks. But each kill they drop bolts and gears that you have to quickly pick up in order to upgrade - strength, defense, speed, or weapon slot.

Each time you upgrade, you become a little larger *(but slower) faster *(but weaker) or just become a full on tank or glass canon with the punches.

Now, if you wanna team up agains a big baddy, you can do so and reap the spoils and eventually only one is left.

[Adventures With Anxiety!]

You should be making iOs and Android games. This frame fits perfectly too.

A great story game about mental illness. Should dive deeper. Also that hoodie is really marketable.

[Renaine [OLD KS BUILD II]]

Can't wait to see it on game download stores.

My only suggestion is fix the music. Really get a killer sound-track. Right now the Jazz seems a bit off for a fantasy game with swords.

And perhaps add some contract to the foreground vs the background.

One gameplay suggestion would be the sword has a juggling feature for crossing gaps.

Kinda like a double jump, a sword swing allows the player to "fly" a bit and land another hit. Thus landing some neat air-gap crossing moves.

Potential Potential

But you'll really need to do something to be the next Shovel Knight.

[Do you know De Wae]

As fun as this game is, if you are making money off of this...shouldn't Gregzilla get a cut?

Even though it's a parody of Knuckles, technically he is the creation of the youtuber right?

Aside from that, it's a pretty fun game.

jeremy7986 responds:

It's basically non-commercial, it's also a free game in android version.
However I still links Gregzilla's Youtube channel in links page.
Anyway thanks! :D

[Punch The Trump]

AWESOME!

Now make one with Kim Davis and Martin Shkreli.

[Spike's Day Off]

Not bad, why don't you submit to Equestrian Daily?

sonicboy112 responds:

You can do that? Is there an FAQ or something on EQD so to submit to them?

[The Guardian]

I could've done without the repetitive back-tracking.

And sure, pixel art games are cool. But your making my eyes hurt (x_X)

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My interpretation is this.

There are two way we can react to this.

At first, one might be angry that the villagers killed the Giant's only friend.

But once you take control of the giant, you see the 'tremendous' force the creature really is.

Do the 'scared and misunderstood' villagers really deserve the scorn and detest of the giant's wrath?

That's entirely up to you.

And I 'did' kill a few at first.

But the one's that didn't attack me....I saw those tiny pixels shivering.

It was at that moment I realized the harshness of my angry actions.

And I became no different than the scared villagers who killed my only friend.

So I wondered off, leaving the rest alone.....and myself....alone....but relieved of my revelation.

[Evolvo Plus]

I love the improvements you've made.

And thanks for taking my suggestions so seriously.

I loved the final monster you turn into for the boss fight.

Though you're 'jelly' fish disease gives me an idea.

I noticed you have two different kinds of fish that exhibit different behaviors.

For example. The "ghost" shark.

And the "jelly" fish.

Ever heard of the phrase, you are what you eat?

What if eating certain fish steers you in a particular direction of evolution.

EX: Eating Jellies that sting you pose a risk. But the more you eat, the power you get is the ability to 'shock' other fish, including LARGER fish for a chance to eat them.

Where as eating 'neon' squid and 'ghost' sharks grant the default invisibility power.

Though had I known I was going to turn into a monster with a spike tail, wouldn't it make sense to damage the submarine by taking careful swings with your tail by 'left or right' on the keyboard?

Cause touching the submarine shouldn't damage you, only it's weapons.

And having electricity would make it really cool.

I can't wait till this game is FULL ON 3D and on Xbox live.

[Lazerman]

Here's what I don't like.

- awkward and chaotic controls
- Rage mode last only a few seconds *30-45 seconds would increase joy and allow players to better understand the controls. The powers could be on command when needed, like pressing 2 additional keys.
- Achievements and blood take up WAY too much space on the screen.
- Bosses' attacks are impossible to avoid sometimes. There is no real dodge mechanic. The bullets are invisible and auto target. That's stupid. If you could see the projected bullet, then players can dodge and avoid the energy balls or something.

Here's what I do like.

+ Unique in the sense of a character's "head" being the main hero.
+ A nice little parody of what I wasn't expecting. I was thinking, a MegaMan spoof? No...this is different.

What would've been cool is being able to control the character's body when you beat the game. Say for an epic final FINAL boss. Almost like a treat for all your hard work. The hero would be UBER powerful, shooting actual lasers from his mouth or something.

NSBrotherhood responds:

Thanks, a good feedback, will think.